Essay (based on an article)

The African countries do not get any support from the outer world. https://www.theguardian.com/global-development/2019/may/20/simple-mistakes-big-impact-man-with-tablet-for-making-aid-better-kamaleon-community-tablet-dayn-amade


We live in a world full of violence, deceiption and control. Every country thinks only about its own protection and safety, about its own economy and population. However, there are some cases when the relationships between two countries are friendly. They share their resouces, support each other. There is a thought that Africa, being poor, does not get any help from others, while some people suppose that this country is not alone. Who is right?

(I haven't finished writing it yet)

Comments

  1. I see, thanks for letting me know. Hope you'll finish it by the end of Friday, May 24, and share it with me.

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    1. As a reminder, thesis statements are affirmative sentences; they can't be formulated as questions. Questions can be used as way to introduce your reader to the topic to attract his/her attention to it.

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