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we should get over the broken relationship first
Some say that the best cure after a break-up is finding another partner. Others say we should get over the broken relationship first.
Nowadays relationships between a man and a woman are becoming more and more unserious. People fall in love in a blink of an eye, then go out together, spend time sitting in cafes or universities. After a few months they break up because of some quarrel. Sometimes it is painless for both of the partners to stop relationships. However, sometimes it could be hard for one of them. What if a person wants to find his/her true love in a next person? Should he do it after breaking-up or wait a little bit.
Some people think that those who has just lost his/her beloved, should immediately find another one.
That is because they hope to find somebody similar to his/her ex-lover, or vice versa somebody completely different. It depends on the situation and on person's particular character features. For example, in chinese series I am watching recently there was a situation where a boy had lost the love of his life, and then tried to find it in another girl. Although it was extremely hard for him, but eventually, he succeeded.
But others think that such situation can lead to another one break-up. They believe that because it is hard to break-up, the one who suffers more should wait a little bit, and then find a solace in another person. First of all, people should forget about each other to start finding his/her destiny. For example, the boy I used to love had suddenly stopped communicating with me. First, I was really upset and completely destroyed. But then I understood that he is not the only one in the whole world, and that the time has not come yet for me to find my destiny.
All in all, I suppose that relationships is a really serious and tricky question. People have different situations, different love stories, which can be unexpected. Every person should decide for him/herself how to act, and when to start or continue searching for true love.
we should get over the broken relationship first
Some say that the best cure after a break-up is finding another partner. Others say we should get over the broken relationship first.
Nowadays relationships between a man and a woman are becoming more and more unserious. People fall in love in a blink of an eye, then go out together, spend time sitting in cafes or universities. After a few months they break up because of some quarrel. Sometimes it is painless for both of the partners to stop relationships. However, sometimes it could be hard for one of them. What if a person wants to find his/her true love in a next person? Should he do it after breaking-up or wait a little bit.
Some people think that those who has just lost his/her beloved, should immediately find another one.
That is because they hope to find somebody similar to his/her ex-lover, or vice versa somebody completely different. It depends on the situation and on person's particular character features. For example, in chinese series I am watching recently there was a situation where a boy had lost the love of his life, and then tried to find it in another girl. Although it was extremely hard for him, but eventually, he succeeded.
But others think that such situation can lead to another one break-up. They believe that because it is hard to break-up, the one who suffers more should wait a little bit, and then find a solace in another person. First of all, people should forget about each other to start finding his/her destiny. For example, the boy I used to love had suddenly stopped communicating with me. First, I was really upset and completely destroyed. But then I understood that he is not the only one in the whole world, and that the time has not come yet for me to find my destiny.
All in all, I suppose that relationships is a really serious and tricky question. People have different situations, different love stories, which can be unexpected. Every person should decide for him/herself how to act, and when to start or continue searching for true love.
Melissa,
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