Argumentative essay on topic: The country should be more liberal
towards embracing new cultural changes
The world is changing. It has been changing from the very beginning. Culture changes are one of the most reasonable of them, as culture reflects nation's character. However, these modifications are not always acceptable by the government. Some think that the country should be more tolerant to changes in culture, while others suppose that it should not.
In my opinion, cultural modification always leads to development inside the country. For example, in the late 1800s and early 1900s people invented electric goods that immidiately changed people's life: airplanes, radios, cars, lamps, telephones, etc. These inventions not only have made people's lives easier, but they have also shaped a new culture, as there appeared new activities. So, cultural changes have a positive impact on the whole country.
Moreover, changes build new history. For instance, when Christopher Columbus discoverered America, he also brought Europeans some new things that sooner led to cultural changes. For example, new kinds of food (potatoes, tomatoes) transformed the European diet, and horse breeds that changed hunting practices of Native American tribes of the Great Plains. So, we see that this fact has changed the situation in the country's history.
However, some people believe that changes cause a mess in a country. For example, when new employees pick up the culture's code of ethics from their co-workers. If they see that the company supports discrimination, they may feel free to do what they want to do. So such kind of cultural change would destroy discipline.
All in all, I believe that changes in country's culture are essential, as they bring some kind of development to it. So the government should not prohibit people to create and spread new ideas.
The world is changing. It has been changing from the very beginning. Culture changes are one of the most reasonable of them, as culture reflects nation's character. However, these modifications are not always acceptable by the government. Some think that the country should be more tolerant to changes in culture, while others suppose that it should not.
In my opinion, cultural modification always leads to development inside the country. For example, in the late 1800s and early 1900s people invented electric goods that immidiately changed people's life: airplanes, radios, cars, lamps, telephones, etc. These inventions not only have made people's lives easier, but they have also shaped a new culture, as there appeared new activities. So, cultural changes have a positive impact on the whole country.
Moreover, changes build new history. For instance, when Christopher Columbus discoverered America, he also brought Europeans some new things that sooner led to cultural changes. For example, new kinds of food (potatoes, tomatoes) transformed the European diet, and horse breeds that changed hunting practices of Native American tribes of the Great Plains. So, we see that this fact has changed the situation in the country's history.
However, some people believe that changes cause a mess in a country. For example, when new employees pick up the culture's code of ethics from their co-workers. If they see that the company supports discrimination, they may feel free to do what they want to do. So such kind of cultural change would destroy discipline.
All in all, I believe that changes in country's culture are essential, as they bring some kind of development to it. So the government should not prohibit people to create and spread new ideas.
Hi, Melissa! It was really interesting to read this draft! I found your arguments strong. Everyone can decide it for himself, but changes in country's culture is very significant!
ReplyDeleteHi, Yana! Thanks for your opinion! I really appreciate your words!
ReplyDeleteHello Melissa,
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing your essay draft with us. The topic you have chosen is very interesting and you have managed to consider a number of asects of it quite well. Your arguments are well-supported with evidence, and it is also easy to read. What you can improve in your essay is its concluding paragraph: do you remember any techniques for writing conclusions? If yes, try to use one of them; if no, check them here http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/conclude.html